poetry funness

[desertions]

Went to Gregory's graduation
found out two things:
1) I still sorta like him
2) His little brother (who's a year younger then me) is like a genius, and fun to talk to

Anyways...
I was going through some of my poems and decided that the next few posts I'm going to try to post some, get some feedback.
Some will be old, some new, I'll generally let you know the era

I wrote this one a few monthes ago...
Kate
All alone, but what’s new?
I’m all too acquainted to abuse
So I fucked up again
No wonder you can’t stand being my friend
You got sick of me like all the rest
Well, I have something to confess
I have already accepted my fate
‘Cause I’m sick and tired of being Kate
Want to be someone other then me
Want to fly free
But my one true enemy
I always see
In the mirror we stand face to face
Reminding me of my disgrace
I can’t even get myself to cry
You hate me now well so do I
And I have already accepted my fate
Cause I’m sick and tired of being Kate



This one I wrote a few days ago...

Nothing
Why can’t I forget this?
All the misery I’ve been through?
It seems like every single day,
I manage to disappoint someone new
Nothing changes
And nothing is okay
I can’t keep this up,
Just existing this way
Since I was born
All I have ever known is pain
If this keeps up,
I’ll crack up again
Everyone’s dead
Everyone’s gone
And I have overstayed my welcome
For much too long
I have to escape this,
I need to be free
But at the end of the day
I’m stuck her alone with me
Drops of crimson
Rushing down my arm
All I know
Is the pain and harm
Sometimes I wish
I could just fade away
But for some odd reason
I’m forced to stay
Nothing changes
And nothing is okay
I can’t keep this up,
Just existing this way
I want to escape this,
I’m tired of being
I want to fade
And become nothing


Feedback is welcome and appriciated!